Good to know! None on the top of my head but if something new and creepy is coming up, I'll try to tw it at the beginning maybe. Your descriptions are just fine! Like I said, just don't linger too long on the grotesque and I'm good. Hell I wrote about the janitor and a gnarly decomposing body lol. [hr] I like her items too! The crown of overflowing chalice is really neat, and I love the Outlaw's grit ability. I'm in love with Loralie's shield lol. I can't wait for NPCs to start dropping! As far as Zoe- I think she's been a little mysterious in your writing so far, but that kind of plays into who she is? Also- I think as her and Hannah's relationship changes and plots ebb and flow, we'll see a lot of different stuff. Also- you've been taking on a lot of the dungeon rules exposition- which is really important- but also takes time! Can't wait to see how they change more! Me too! Seems like Zoe and Hannah are kind of crushing it to be honest, which is a nice FOIL to Loralie absolutely being off her rocker. She's kind of playing a bit more 'mad'(crazy) than I'd originally intended, but I'm gonna keep morphing it here toward the anger angle. I'm not used to tapping into those emotions really- so it's new for me, so I'm really glad it's landing for you! You're doing a crazy good job at getting the rules of the dungeon laid out, and I'm really thankful! Hopefully it doesn't feel inequitable at all- just let me know if you want some help/etc! As always having a great time here!