[@JJ Doe] Putting this here since thou checketh thy Discord half as oft as thou ought

What a wonderful post. Completely worth the wait. You understand so well that a narrative is mainly aimed and focused at what a character notices, and yet despite this character mainly noticing WASP, NIMBY mundanities (what will the Joneses think? Poly tablecloths or sateen?) it's somehow completely gripping. I love the nuance of her characterization also. The way the run-on sentences capture overstimulation and hyper-alertness. And as always, the efficiency of your prose. Great work!

[@JFK] How's it going Mr. President? You didn't forget about us did you?