[@Nakushita]

Your genre doesn't have the max MP listed next to capacity, which should be (30). You also have 5 notes at the three casting levels when you should only have 3. Increase your capacity (while reducing an other attribute or two) or lower the number of notes you have.

You've shorted yourself 20 credits. Redistribute a grade of wealth onto something else or buy 20 credits worth of items. 

I don't typically like Aigorost name drops in backstories (or any horror really) but Himiko does seem like the only person other than Oros the Mad that might ramble about a patron she's never met before. Nothing needs to be changed, just commenting. 

Also what's "Squisy"? I noticed you underlined those letters and I can't make heads or tails of it. Also you have a strike through a random "h" for some reason. [u]Squis[/u][s]h[/s][u]y[/u]? I dunno, seems kinda silly.

Take care of that and we'll see about getting you approved.