[quote=@Hope Lover] Okay, so I already have my first character in mind, but I'm wondering how I can edit his backstory to integrate him into the greater scope of your roleplaying game. I'm open to ideas! [hider=Frank Richardson (SuperEgo)] [hider=Picture: Casual and Hero Suit] [url=https://ibb.co/bjQ6HcDC][img]https://i.ibb.co/p6b1WY5M/Frank-Richardson-Super-Ego.webp[/img][/url] [url=https://ibb.co/xtmPmFjy][img]https://i.ibb.co/tTZkZLsS/Super-Ego-Hero-Suit.webp[/img][/url] [/hider] [b]Name:[/b] Francis Benjamin Richardson, Psy.D. [b]Alias:[/b] SuperEgo [b]Age:[/b] November 6th, 1995 (age 30) [b]Gender:[/b] Male [b]Appearance:[/b] Standing at 192 cm high with broad shoulders and overall high muscle mass, but fairly long limbs, Frank strikes an imposing figure despite his profession. His hair is brown and short, with a couple of bangs falling loosely over his thick eyebrows and brown eyes (the right of which is green because of his Xestrite power). He has a large but finely shaped nose and a somewhat prominent chin. [b]Superpower:[/b] [u]Mind-reading[/u]; it allows SuperEgo to read an opposing person's brainwaves with an effective range of 2 meters from his right eye. Overuse strains the optic nerve, and in extreme cases, can cause permanent blindness in the eye. He mostly uses it to predict motor actions, which is useful in a fight, but at this time, he's unable to accurately read thoughts. [b]Skills:[/b] [list][*] [u]High body strength:[/u] acquired mostly from weightlifting exercises and calisthenics, and through playing waterpolo in high school and college. [*] [u]Martial arts proficiency:[/u] Another thing he trained in high school: he gravitated from aikido to karate to kickboxing. He's also very well-versed in the weakspots of the human body. [*] [u]Psychology knowledge:[/u] even without Mind-reading, he's very good at using subtle manipulation to wear his opponents out. [/list][b]Equipment:[/b] [list][*] [u]SuperEgo armor suit[/u]: Nomex base, kevlar breastplate (impervious to gunfire), shoulder, arm and leg armor, Nomex gloves [*] [u]Kevlar-Nomex trenchcoat[/u] with Kevlar shoulder pads, highly resistant to water and fire, worn on colder weather [*] [u]SuperVisor[/u]: fully encasing helmet equipped with a soothing system for Frank's right eye [*] [u]Gravity mine[/u] (pulls in objects and creatures within a 60 centimeter radius and holds them down for one minute, but the effect can be stronger with targets that struggle; one-time use only) [*] [u]Specialty revolver[/u]: six-shooter with flash rounds (flashbangs), pepper rounds (pepper spray), taser rounds and Smash round (release a strong amount of kinetic energy at contact for knocking back powerful opponents) [/list][b]Personality:[/b] One feature that immediately stands out about Frank is his stoic, level-headed temperament. When engaged with a task, he has a remarkable ability to persist even through the most arduous of challenges without showing discomfort or anger, though it isn't without limits. Consequently, he has patience even for the most unreasonable patients. Beneath this phlegmatic exterior is a caring heart and a strong sense of justice, seeing intrinsic value in all people. And that sense of justice being betrayed is one of the few triggers for anger in him. [b]Biography:[/b] WIP [b]Relationships:[/b] [list] [*] Melanie Richardson (née Johnson): wife (alive) [/list][b]Extra:[/b] His favorite food is barbecued meat. Hates pickles. Was considered handsome by his female colleagues in college. Likes biker jackets. His star sign is Scorpio. His favorite song is [i]Driving Home for Christmas[/i] by Chris Rea. [/hider] [/quote] Sure that could work. If you want you can DM and we can spit ball some ideas. [quote=@Floofenstein] Ah, while I get started: Is certain spots of super-tech allowed? er, the idea I had in mind involved cybernetic augmentations, is that acceptable? To what extent? [/quote] I think that's fine. Where you thinking of your character being an Iron Man/Machine Man analogue?