[quote=@StarfrostedFox]
[@tadcfnaf] I like him overall, but one of the rules is no legendary. I know it works in with the backstory and everything, but I think it would make him overpowered. If you edited him so that it could feel like something he could achieve in the future, I would be OK with that. But I don't think it would be appropriate for the story right now as is.
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Done.