[quote=@BrutalBx] [@StormyX] I love the way you write Eve’s prose. That shit’s hypnotic. [/quote] Thank you so much, I've been enjoying writing her a lot. Wanted to just post here too that [quote]Every muscle protested and like a seasoned politician, he simply ignored them.[/quote] made me lmao. Low key Bret being Cumbrian cracks me up a bit as well because that's far too close to home for me Caught up entirely on the IC now, can't believe we've blitzed out a page and not only that, everyone has added some lore and depth to Calder City to help flesh it out. Scott is trying to do his best as a hero and live up to his generational legacy. The save of Marth was really sweet and I hope the characters interact again! Archie is so enjoyable to read as this origin story. Seeing where he is now in his life and knowing the jump we have to make to get him to becoming the Warlock... I CAN'T wait. Dani, with Scott are the heart of the RP for me so far, really representing what I feel it means to be a Grey and want to do your best. I really like what Eddie is setting up with Dani in keeping her anonymity, but still needing to step in just because it feels right. I hope she gets her radio job! Bret and The Pilgrim are doing some great lifting in adding a seedy underbelly to the City that's also making it feel so alive - with another crimelord alongside the Raciti Famiglia in the City, I would imagine they are rivals and might have plays for power which could give Eve an in with Bret at some point. (Thinking ahead) Love Richard's powers, it's so needed in the City to be able to fix and mend things and I enjoyed the way that was writter, I'm looking forward to seeing more of him, and how he will interact with some of the other characters. Another heart of this RP, is definitely Joanie - you can feel the love she has in that first post and the respect the other kids have for her. She's everyone's big sister, until she meets her own twisted sister in Eve (that was a fun collab so thank you for cameoing!) I love what Natty is building up there, and I'm rooting for Joanie. Also, we absolutely hate Caleb in this household! The Lucie post was a fun read, and I kept having to wrap my head around what it would be like to live such a life (or 4 I suppose!) but it was really sharp, funny, and gave quite a few tells to the character(s). Keen to see the dynamic continue! Absolutely love Rock and the way Doc wrote that first post, leading into a fantastic plot with Detective Dusk; Sep has been doing some great work to develop plot threads for the overarching story of the game. I really like that Dusk carries a tainted legacy with him, and is trying his best to do good things despite the pressures of his family and his name. Qing Yuan too - absolutely cannot wait to see more of him and I'm just looking for any kind of excuse to have him and Eve meet, I don't know, RP intuition I think it might be an interesting meeting that they'd have, and I think Qing could really help Eve calm her mind and her spirit (and spirits lol) So, that is all to say GREAT STUFF and I'm fully hooked and invested, and we still have more characters to go. Please give me all the collabs, thank u.