[quote=@Theyra]
<Snipped quote by Flarbinia>

Your CS is fine, but I suggest adding more stuff to both the personality and personal belongings/equipment sections. Since for personality, it should have more than that. For the personal belongings/equipment part, unless you want him to be totally unprepared for the journey to the Lost World and have to rely on others to survive. Add some more survival gear, and that is all I have to say right now.  
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Fixed