Lakshmi felt a fear from this man, she was scared of him, sure he was fixing her arm up, but he had just put a gun to her head, she had decided it'd be the best plan of action just to follow his orders and do what he says. She took a few sniffs of the dusty air, she could smell smoke, but not fire smoke, cigarette smoke, the smell almost made her smile, it reminded her of her dad. "T-t-t-thank you" she said, her stammer had become more pronounced as her fear increased.

(( Btw, just a quick thing: Their= possession 'Their dog has a limp' they're= shortened 'they are' there = place. Aloud = out speaking Allowed= acceptable, 'smoking was allowed in the pub'))