@Destinyfailhorror17 eeeeeeh...I can't really find anything wrong with your character. He just seems a bit under developed/bare bones, but games are meant for developing characters. And my Hertha is a bit underdeveloped for my personal standards so I won't cast that stone so hard. My only other comment would be that he seems more like a HxH or Fairly tail Character than a OP one, but the world of OP is wide and varied so I would not doubt a character like him could exist.