Demensia: While the character concept in and of itself is pretty cool, he's lacking something for motivation. Why did he volunteer for this program? A chance to return to action after sustaining an injury perhaps, à la Manta's Gift?

Shoryu: While I can guess where he's from from the "service record," I'll ask that you specify which military in the "outfit and rank section." Also, you failed to earn your bonus points for the "Other" section, though that was optional to begin with. You're pretty much good to go.