I have no idea how to link my profile to a hyperlink so you can just click and go to my template so I'm copying it below so I can get help. I need someone to look at it and for one, tell me if it's alright (i know its unfinished) and the other thing is, I kinda need help. I'm really rusty and on top of that, you guys have created like 20 characters so I don't know if I'm copying anyone. For some reason it wasn't letting me put this in a spoiler because i already have a spoiler on here or something.

Name: Shusuke Hotokai

Appearance:[hider=My Spoiler]He doesn't wear the captain's haori.[img]http://th01.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2012/214/2/f/paypal_commission___saito_of_squad_9_by_zanpakuto_leader-d59m2cu.jpg[/img][/hider]
Age: 200

Height: 6'2

Weight: 185

Race: Shinigami

Rank: Unseated

Spiritual Energy Color: Red

Personality: (Would like to be done but can be done later)

History: (Would like to be done but can be done later)

Other: 

~Zanpakuto~

Zanpakuto name: HyoujinToku (Sharp Shield)

Type: 

Zanpakuto Shikai Release command: 

Spirit Appearance: (optional)

Inner world: (optional)

Sealed appearance: Red lace handle, rectangle tsuba, black sheath.

Shikai appearance: [hider=My Spoiler][img]http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/attachments/concept-art-fan-art-275/124602d1366324239-concept-art-mini-contests-how-would-i-my-weapon-bleach_anime_tengen_sajin_komamura_sword.jpg[/img][/hider]

Bankai appearance: Will add once Bankai is achieved. 

Shikai skills:
(Start off with no Shikai or 4 to 5 Shikai skills)
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Bankai skills:
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6. (Ultimate Skill)

Non-lethal Zanpakuto Skills:

Skills

Zanjutsu:
Kido:
Hakuda:
Hoho:

Points gained from missions:
Mission log:
Points spent and skills gained: