[quote=Garrison]
I have no idea how to link my profile to a hyperlink so you can just click and go to my template so I'm copying it below so I can get help. I need someone to look at it and for one, tell me if it's alright (i know its unfinished) and the other thing is, I kinda need help. I'm really rusty and on top of that, you guys have created like 20 characters so I don't know if I'm copying anyone. For some reason it wasn't letting me put this in a spoiler because i already have a spoiler on here or something.Name: Shusuke HotokaiAppearance:Age: 185Height: 6'2Weight: 185Race: ShinigamiRank: UnseatedSpiritual Energy Color: OrangePersonality: (Would like to be done but can be done later)History: (Would like to be done but can be done later)Other: ~Zanpakuto~Zanpakuto name: HyoujinToku (Sharp Shield)Type: Zanpakuto Shikai Release command: Spirit Appearance: (optional)Inner world: (optional)Sealed appearance: See my appearance above, red lace handle, rectangle tsuba, black sheath.Shikai appearance: Bankai appearance: Will add once Bankai is achieved. Shikai skills:(Start off with no Shikai or 4 to 5 Shikai skills)1. Has the power to temporarily neutralize the wielder's pain receptors and halt any blood loss, this doesn't actually heal the wound however. This ability allows the user to remain in combat and fight at his full potential even if wounded. Once the ability or dismissed or the zanpakuto is sealed, all the pain and blood that was withheld rushes through the user.2.3.4.5.6.7.8.Bankai skills:1.2.3.4.5.6. (Ultimate Skill)Non-lethal Zanpakuto Skills:SkillsZanjutsu:Kido:Hakuda:Hoho:Points gained from missions:Mission log:Points spent and skills gained:
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Looks ok so far, just add how long your ability can go on for. 
If it goes on for as long as he wants (Until he seals the Zanpakuto) then he's pretty much invincible aaaaaaaand we can't have that. So add a number of post for how long the ability can last, my take on it anyways.