Ben:

Personally? We didn’t really find much [i]right[/i] with the CS at that end, and one of the moderation staff members noted that it was particularly difficult to read at times due to the lack of English grammar (I understand that juggling different laws of different languages is a feat in itself, but I’ve known people who’ve I’ve RPed with from foreign lands who don’t have this much difficulty grasping it). But its not just grammar; it's fluidity, formatting, and structure that leaves it all very so much jagged to the tongue. There’s also concerns of narrative and other stuff and some of us don’t feel entirely too confident and I’m not letting every CS in on a pass—that takes the enjoyment out of it for some of the other players, which as I’ve had, have discussed that with me. Though you are not convincing me with statements such as “that I could teach you where to place a comma” – do you want me to retort that we are not using Scandinavian grammar laws here? Do you wish for dramatics? I don’t want dramatics and I do not want to burn bridges.

I will not argue beyond this. I've told you what is and I will NOT drag the RP down over back-and-forth arguing.