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[b]Name:[/b] Helen Davidson
[b]Age:[/b] 17
[b]Strengths:[/b] 
Helen is sly and cunning with an ability to get what she wants, no matter who stands in her way. She also has had military training. She is strategic.
[b]Weakness(es):[/b] 
She easily makes enemies and is very unlikeable as well as her manipulative nature relies on the abilities of those she controls
[b]Personality:[/b] 
Helen is a hotheaded young lady who does things her way and doesn’t care who gets in the way. Normally, she is blunt, sarcastic, and antagonistic with an arrogant attitude that most do not appreciate. However, she never underestimates her opponent and takes every precaution she can. Many of her peers consider Helen as “petty” since she will sink to “low” depths to get what she wants; she attacks and utilizes all of her tools – even people – as best as she can. Some consider her two-faced, which is contradictory considering that she is also considered blunt: this can be explained. She is only blunt when the truth does not harm herself in her plans, but she easily lies if it benefits her in anyway. Helen has to be in power no matter what. 
[b]Bio:[/b]
Helen was sent away when she was twelve to a military school by her parents. Her father was in the military as well as his father, and his father’s father. Helen’s brothers had joined the military, her mother had retired from the military, and her family as a whole revolved around the military life. Because of this, her father encouraged her to seek military schooling before she herself joined the military. Of course, Helen was fine with this – she was raised to enjoy the military life. However, when she turned seventeen, her grandmother pulled her out of military school because she wanted her to experience high school normally. Her parents were enraged, but agreed that Helen could spend her junior and senior year at a normal public high school.[/center]
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So, is my character okay?