[quote=AcetheKidd]
Rest my friend 3Name: Kalen PooleAge: 18Gender: maleGuild: None atmGuild Mark: None At,Magic: Dark Phoenix magic( dark fire)full body takeover: is able is to go full phoenix Personality: Kalen is to his self and avoid others. He can be very rude and mean towards others, abit selfish to. Hes cool clam and collectiveHistory: ( about a few years ago)Kalen and his twin sister lived in a small village outside of the Mongolia. Around the age of five, his village was burnt to the ground by an enemy village,declaring a war. The enemy manged to kidnap his parents, but his sister manged to escape. Kalen tried his best to catch up with his sister, but lost her. Since that awful day, Kalen had wondered around alone,but soon enough befriend a grey/blue exceed name Kay. Later on in his life,Kalen met up with a dark phoenix, who was dressed at an nicely dressed human. The phoenix saw the the darkness in Kalen's heart and started to teach him some magic( during the invasion)Kalen and Kay where on their way to Mongolia with the attack happen. He didn't want to get invole with fairy tail's fight, even if one did save his life once before, and turned to tend to his selfAppearance: 
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were you working on your phone ace? there some serious grammatical issues and stuff here o.o 
i wouldnt say anything if i didn't know you were better than this. so i need you to fix it up a bit. also you need to explain phoenix magic a bit more. and finally i'm not really sure whether or not you are with us... elaborate a bit for me ace. you can do better. i've seen you do better. sorryif i'm being blunt or sound jerky. 

[quote=Demous]
damn :/ I've been around but had other roleplays that were active to pay attention so got back here a little late.. oh well let me know when/if I can come back <.< >.>
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with you back i'll let in ace and yip and that'll be it since nobody else has come back or spoken up.

[quote=YipeeXD]
i'll get a cs up asap
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okay yip