[quote=sam haley] err, i'm unfamiliar as to how i delete my posts [/quote] There actually isn't a "delete post" feature on the new Guild yet. Just go to "edit" and replace your post with a period or something, then re-edit that post with your post once your char has been formally accepted. I said post so many times. Post post post... [B]Also, if I may offer some advice in your CS.[/b] [Indent]I don't think that just saying lycanthropy for the ability is quite adequate. Since powers are subjective and have many definitions, you should include an in-depth description carefully outlining what that ability offers to your character. And for the weaknesses, I don't understand how enchantments and swords would be a weakness. (Nobody has enchantments...) The weakness is supposed to be outlining the limits and weak points of the [i]special ability[/i] I believe. And from what you've written, it seems like you think this roleplay is combat based? Ot ar least invoving some sort of magical combat. It really isn't, although I'm sure some friendly spars and perhaps even an all out fight will occur. (In like a high school, college-esque way, not like a ninja or a fantasy epic kind of way) And finally, I'm not entirely sure if your character is what Tali is looking for in this roleplay. It has mystical/fantastical implications which I believe she wanted to avoid. From my understanding, this is supposed to be a rather 'realistic' roleplay, not dealing with curses or anything. Just about people who were born with a little extra something.[/indent] I'm not saying your character is bad per se, I just don't know if he'll be a good fit for this roleplay specifically. Which is why CS evaluation is important. I actually think you might've gotten the wrong idea of what this roleplay is about, but I could be wrong. [U]But don't take my words to heart, I have absolutely no authority to say any of this[/u] XD I'm just offering you tips as a seasoned roleplayer. [B][u]PS Tali, I'm not trying to steal your position or authority as the GM! I'm just trying to help and make things easier on you~ as a person who is GMing an RP, I know how difficult it can be sometimes. Sorry if I went over the line or anything![/b][/u]