That was a little less civilized, than I had hoped for.
In all fairness your understanding of where to place a comma is not just wrong my Scandinavian rules. It's wrong (or lacking) by the USA and English too. But who cares? I wasn't disturbed by your way of writing. I only notice things like that, when I analyses a sentence. I rather not take your writing apart and show examples, because I feel like that would only offend you. And again: It didn't stop me from enjoying some good ol' RP.
 If you wanna give constructive criticism, then please be ready to occasionally receive it. Even if you believe yourself to be a better writer than someone, that doesn't mean you can do absolutely everything better than them. No one is attacking you.

As my post stated, I'm not out to argue. I only asked for one thing: An understanding of what exactly was lacking from my CS.
Simply stating that everything is wrong is not helpful to anyone, and slightly childish.
I don't expect to walk out of this agreeing with you. And I don't need to. If my only argument is that I disagree, then I will not write a response at all.
But if you tell me that nothing worked in my CS... then yes... I do think you are lying. Lying because you possibly think, that statement can make me angry or hurt me or something. I can sure as hell always find something good in everyone's posts, and I don't believe mine is so bad it would be hard to find (that possibly sounds like I'm angry because I use words like "hell", but I'm not). I actually don't consider my writing "bad" at all.

 If I make you angry, then please take a small break to calm down before responding. I'm sure no one wish for dramatics.

You don't need you to make a long list of flaws or good/bad sentences about my writing. You could probably have finished explaining it to me by now, if you had chosen to focus on shedding some light on what I asked.

 Just shoot me a PM with a statement about what you would advice me to work on and why. Just make sure you explain it properly. Now, you don't have to say what is good, just don't say that nothing was right (that doesn't help anyone, and again: It's childish). This is a simple task and quick to do. I can't make you, but from one writer to another: I do believe in all fairness I deserve it.