I will have a PM sent, but the only one who seems to have taken any offense is not me that much is clear. No ill intent was spoken in my previous reply only analysis offered by moderation consultants. That's the end on that subject.

[quote]Slade CS updated; if further revisions are needed, I'll make them.[/quote]

How was a military/civilian psychiatrist even connected to the Mirakuru project? I think a recommendation would of likely came from Slade's command chain rather than his psych therapist. Unless Mirakuru was an experimental psychoactive drug and was meant to balance traumatized soldiers - but if that was so I don't understand why he went "rambo" on the doctors or officers involved. 

[i]A year after Mirakuru, he resigned from ASIS and killed everyone involved with manufacturing the serum, believing them to have forgotten all sense of honor and morality.[/i] - I'd elaborate on this one.

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Hey guys, sorry for the absence but college is taking a lot out of me. I am in the works of tweaking my CS and finishing the sample but first I feel the need to ask...Gowi, do you have any comments or concerns about the way my CS has turned out so far, specifically the back story? I only ask since the major comment in every "criticism" (for lack of a better word) is quality control.
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[i]Stevens would spend the entirety of his childhood enamored with the idea of superheroes.[/i] - How was he enamored with the idea if superheroes only publicly appeared four years ago? Do you mean comic books? I'm unsure where this connection is made.

My big question is why you decided to melt the iconic Helm of Fate, though? I don't really understand why it's necessary when normally its the link between the god of order himself and the mortal plane.

So far it looks like the strongest concept you've had since you debuted as White Lantern in Bruce's version of this game.