/\ Yes, about that. Seems a bit... familiar (in other words he's not the only orphan living with an old man in this game) but since there's technically nothing wrong with it, I suppose it's acceptable.

And for the love of God, before I forget, Reapthemusic. First of all I apologize for taking so long to respond. Anyway, if you make the changes you suggested then you too will also be accepted. Just a fair warning though, his situation is going to cause him to have a tougher time than others. Hope that doesn't bother you.