[quote=Sundered Echo] Oh Gods.I had wondered if that might be the reason you weren't on the IRC today. This is terrible news...I really hope your internet is back working again soon. Until then, 1000 hugs from me to tide you over... Keep coming back here for more. XDWe'll keep Jayda and Xid safe for you, no executions or anything. You aren't missing much in Aftermath right now though anyway, things haven't quite yet got back fully into action. [/quote] Thank goodness, I was worried there for a bit. And I've got a Navi post and aim to post it later tonight, maybe or tomorrow. [quote=EliteCommander] Nice, do you think there would be anything that would require me to change his background? I noticed there were some changes to the Esyire's description, and that of the Scorched Lands. Do you think any of that would prevent the clan rivalry in his background from happening? [/quote] I left the Esyire's open, as well as with any character race descriptions, open for PC creativity. The main idea behind the description was to aid in PCs keeping in some sort of union. :p Nothing big. As for Clan rivalry, it's still possible with the lesser (smaler) branched off clans of Esyires. [quote=Lucius Cypher] Yo, do whatever you feel you got to. You don't need to fulfill any particular niche, and there will enviably by someone with the same race and magic as another. All that matters is how you play it. [/quote] This I agree with namely since this provides more PCS for the Noxomancy alignment besides there's 3 different aspects you can choose from, not just shadow. [quote=Freeshooter92] Now, I know ores aren't my job, but I do have a few nitpicks with it...Greystone: I noticed the description said it was very light, while also saying it was lead. Lead is actually very very heavy.Bronze: bronze is not a naturally occuring metal, but a tin and copper alloy. is slowsilver tin?Ebony: If Ebony is not harder than Iron, it cannot be sharper. harder things arre more brittle, so that will keep it balanced.Adamantium and Mythril: Not actually a nit pick but what if you had a thin layer of mythril over adamant plates? That could potetially be overpowered. [/quote] There's some things I'm still editing as I wanted to get something up as a place holder and due with a lot of revamping, not everything is perfect or to satisfaction so if you spot something bring it to my attention. But please be nice about is all I ask. I've done a lot and it most of it is based off the Old OOC, which I tried to keep as close to it as possible. As for the combinaition of mythril and adamant plates would be impossible since Mythril doesn't play well with other metals. (I'll add this to the OoC when I get time. My first concern is getting PC accepted then start the IC. Speaking of that, I'll get Khan and Mar's up shortly... [quote=Sundered Echo] Some of those nitpicks have weight, but with things like ebony, its defined here because its not necessarily the same as real life... There may very well have been an event in Tiiens past that alloyed lots of tin and copper, and so bronze would seem like a naturally occurring material... [/quote] You also forgot the Gods did shift everything aorund after the world was destoryed the first time so any real rules don't really apply to the letter in Tiien. Trust me, you'll be glad it doesn't in the future acts. [quote=Sundered Echo] Noooo NOOOO!!!Not the belly!!!FallenReaper! Save me! [/quote] *pops Lucius's belly wide open...*