[quote=Doctor Belasco]
Cheers dude. I think he needs a few tweaks still; I kind of wanted him to have some darker undertones which haven't come through as strongly as I might have liked. We don't really have any manipulative or straight-up villainous characters (yet?!) but I think if we did, his weaknesses would be better exposed.Long-term, his mother probably wouldn't have survived. She was just mildly harder to find than other muggle-borns - if Vloddermor had had more time, he'd have tracked her down eventually.
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Just how dark were you trying to make him? Like, I torture bugs when nobody's around dark, or wanting to learn the Dark Arts to better defend against them type of thing? I think his Grey Jedi view of Magic alone would get some awkward glances from this uber conservative society Wizardkind generally lives in that seems to have a rather generic view of "Good" Magic and "Evil" Magic. 

I wouldn't say that, true, she probably didn't remove her name from the big book of Magic babies, but is there any real way to know a person is Muggle-Born outside of family trees? I'm not sure if the Ministry or whoever keeps documentation of that kind of thing, only the really racist(?)/Fascist(?) families like the Blacks and Malfoys seem to keep detailed records of family marriages, Squib births, so on, so forth.

On a slightly less important note, and I only ask this "Because Quidditch", in what year did Michael become a Chaser? I only ask because Logan could've potentially been captain at the time, and was probably at least the starting Seeker. [S]Also now all we need is a Hufflepuff Character who played Beater and we'll have our own little Quidditch Gang, screw that Slyhterin guy, we don't like him.[/s]