You might have to wait until Rtron has a chance to look over it in the morning as Wild Mages are his domain. I can't say much on it without his say first. Though it's an interesting story, it might be a good idea to PM Rtron on details over it and work through the Wild Mage thing as they are his conception and anything on them is strictly his. I know Leith, another PC, has done that with him and well, that was an interesting thing. :p 

I, personally, would like to see two more good and bad attributes on his CS because it helps me as a GM. Also, a little info on what type of weapon he uses and what his training would include because it gives a bit of an idea of what he's capable of even if its just a bit more. Other then what I mentioned, I don't see anything wrong with him.