Okay. Let me assess it.

Straight away I see you still have 4 strengths, I see the "You name it I shoot it" strength is still there, I suggest moving that to Fighting style, a new area in the application so I can guess which team you'd be put on. Otherwise yeah... It seems okay, I see you lowered the severity of the addiction as he was willing to go to a sober area, just as long as he isn't taking the drugs too often in RP because there will be IC punishments.