Alright! First sheets!

[b]Newclib[/b], I'm a little concerned about how Robert is "older than most of his unit" and has "years of experience" on them when he's only 21, and the minimum recruiting age is 18. Also, you referenced Speros in your biography as a part of Robert's deployment rotation. I may have to make this clearer, but Speros is completely closed off for now. So, if you could adjust Robert's age to be a bit older, and just tweaking where he's been stationed, then you're happily accepted. And a bit of formatting wouldn't go amiss, it all sort of runs together at this point - it's nice to have headers differentiated from the body text.

[b]MST3K[/b], I'm afraid I have several deeper grievances with your sheet. Apart from your mentioning that Robin is versed in alien languages - none of which actually exist within our universe - everything up to the biography is well-written and perfectly acceptable, but I am concerned with the events detailed therein. I like Robin's military background, but not that her father can pull strings to get her into a special unit, when most of GCM personnel terms are simple policing duties on the many colonies in the Genesis System, and I'd also have 'unit specialties' designated by NPC's according to player performances in the IC, rather than the players picking for themselves, so to speak.
Beyond that, your AO1 accident is plausible, but not for your registration - basic vehicle command is covered in Boot Camp. Accident, sure, why not, everyone loves a tragic incident in someone's history. But building a homing device while blind? Surviving alone for three days without being able to see, and likely bleeding at least externally, if not hemorrhaging from breaks and fractures? It's just unlikely, and stretches belief. 
The artificial eyes are the biggest point. There's very little downside to them, and besides that, medicinal technology is very little beyond what we have currently. Which is impressive, surely - but not complete replacement of the eyes impressive. And getting her father to pull strings - again - to get back in the Military while technically not having eyes? It's just...it makes me uncomfortable.

Tweaks, definitely. Take the base of the character, because I like her, but go a different, more grounded direction with it.