All I am seeing here is this: 

Well, fighting in this RP is a big dickwaving contest of "Well, I interrupt your action because I don't want to get hit, then you interrupt mine for the same reason. We COULD charge up stuff and have a kamehameha clash, but that would be the same thing and just result in another interrupt chain." So... rather than a flowing and artistic cinematic fight, it comes across as a long-winded and extra detailed form of chatroom-esque speed posting.

And that shit is annoying.

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Also, for a basic visualization as to Ysolda's "God-Forged Champion of War" resembles... refer to the following

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It's not EXACTLY like that, obviously. But for a basic mental picture of how she looks in relation to the essence-armor/mech thing, it works.