[quote=Edgeworth]
Excellent, Excellent. You mentioned a few simultaneous attacks would be okay in bankai. Previously I had a practical limit of one per limb in bankai as it would require very definite movement like a punch, kick or swing of the arm.etc. So that's a max of 4 not including the spit. Is this a low enough number for simultaneous attacks? If not I can reduce the number down to two or three to keep it balanced but I'll defiantly keep it to one in the shikai.
[/quote]5 Sims is fine in Bankai. Sounds good what you have here.

Sorry I've been away, Ande. As for your CS, there's nothing wrong with it and everything seems to be in order. I enjoyed the History and the Stats are right. I just want to make sure you know of one of the Release clauses about stat changes. I'm too lazy to cut and paste at the moment. If you have any questions, feel free to ask.
The only real thing I can critique is the grammar. There's some awkward punctuation errors and phrasing which was difficult to decipher at times. 
Oh yeah! And there are some discontinuities with her History stating that she's Captain/joined the Seventh Division, not the Eighth.
But now Yue has an age-appropriate peer at their level! ^^
She shall go into the OP now, though. :)

Oh, and another thing, I'm debating whether or not to start the IC. I'm going to type it up tomorrow but I don't know if anyone is looking for more players to be present before I do. If someone's not ready or has questions they'd like answered beforehand, let me know. :D