I see, sorry that my character was not up to par. I also appologize for my inadequacies in spelling and my grammar, English is my second language.At the moment I am without my computer which affects the quality of my post. I am working from a tablet as well hence the reason I could not open the link for the history, as well as the one for the CS. Also the compendium I had assumed it was for applications. In response to some of your critiques, he left the city through a secret dock but as you said earlier the lands of Taure do not exist here so mentioning the islands of Ju'ra Yes it is a pre-made character from some time ago, I was not aware the elves of this RP are so long lived I assumed they aged more closely to humans, his political career circles around that which is why he is not seen as a 15 year old.. As per the magic I appologize though my character does not use magic. His 'spread' range of skills is simple, He has a liking for polotics from his father and what man of any wealth does not take on a means of defending himself and his honor, granted the archery could be too much if accompanied by swordsmanship. His skills as a torturer merely come from a politiciansmind set, analytical and calculating. I can also set his appearance up more if that would please you. I am happy to tailor my character to the standards you've set and will gladly work with anyone willing to help. Though this response may seem to say otherwise I thank you for your critiques. Edit: This is also my first Advanced RP.