[quote=Mista Slaya]
I guess you're right Dervish. I thought I had done better but I guess that was just me hoping. And it isn't really harsh, just honesty. I don't know as much about ME as I should. And I meant to change his age, I had thought about that aspect and thought I had went in and changed it. All well. I think I'll sit this one out, I don't have the material for this. I may still try and fix the whole thing but I'll stay out of here to keep from spamming the forum. Sorry guys. Keep up the good work.
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And that my friend, is how to go out like a [i]sir.[/i]
*tips hat*