I'll be honest with that CS. At first I put it down to reading it on my phone, but looking at it again... I'm struggling to understand it. Like, really struggling. With the whole thing. I've read it about five or six times now and... yeah. I don't really want to judge it when I don't understand it, because I think I'll be judging it harder than I should be. I haven't checked out any samples or anything Orpheus, but is your usual post writing like this? I wouldn't mind an everyman version to be honest =/ PM me?