My main concern was his power limitations, but you covered that pretty nicely. I like that he's like Aria in that distance is a major factor. Like Tae said I also like how he doesn't have any overlaps. It's cool have another melee user around; I'm very curious in seeing how his fighting strategy plays out! I think the confusion here mostly come from the... fluff? I don't know if that's the right word, but it's not as concise and straightforward as what everyone here (incl. myself)'s used to for CSes lol, e.g. since you used "fuse" as a metaphor for his social skills - which I thought was cool actually hahah. It took me some backtracking too (and I'm 205% positive I'm the slowest reader on this entire site), but it's not too difficult to understand haha. That said, I'm personally not concerned over the writing, IC-wise, but maybe a layman's version would be better to understand his character more easily, at least for the CS? Hahaha. (I apologize if this comes off as frowny or criticizing or something; it's not intended to be so. D: Just thought it was something that should be addressed on my end too since 3/4 replies so far brought it up.) [s]EDIT EDIT: I had stuff on his rank here too but that was be being a bumhead and misinterpreting stuff. :D This is why I'm not allowed to read fast.[/s] All in all though I find him and his ability really interesting. I could only imagine the possibilities of combo attacks - amplifying Selan's singing like Pacman mentioned, or silencing Trixie's gunshots when she's trying to distract people. (She wouldn't be in the predicament she's in now if she could do her task while hidden and soundless! XD) :) EDIT: I'm probably the slowest writer here too since your post wasn't up when I started writing mine, Orpheus. orz