A little better, but there still some problem's with the history. Kyle Katarn and Jan Ors would most likely not be where they were in canon. Remember the instructions, you gotta think real hard on this, how and when were they founded in the time after the Empire's fall. While I did say the wiki would be a good source in the rp, but most of the time, not in this case, you will have to make something up, their new history is up to you, don't just copy something that wouldn't exactly fit with the setting.