It all sounds good to me. Me offended by the male Pride? I love the idea that there could be conflict between Envy and Pride; I can imagine Pride finding ways to put down Envy personally and in Sloth's eyes. In addition, the fact that he's older gives him an even bigger air of arrogance which Envy doesn't exactly detest but he'll gladly not have to communicate or even look at him, however often watching him when he communicates with Sloth as he's somewhat realized Pride's intentions. I can imagine also that Ash's ability to steal and Pride's Point Zero would be good in such actions like blackmailing. [i]I mean, having the heart of someone with tasty information is the best way to gather information safely, capish?[/i]