I got beat for the first entry post! :punch

But anyways, getting an entire fortress and human army on your first post is a bit...much. If you slow it down a bit over the next few pages, it should be fine though. I won't make you edit that.

Those cities marked on the map are supposed to have populations upwards of 200,000. I don't want to be bossy or controlling because that sucks out all the fun, but I think it would be a lot better if Viktor took over a castle and a small village a little bit away from Altearx. Massacring the entire population of Altearx on your first post and in just a few hours' time in the RP is honestly ridiculous.