[quote=Cseager] Name - Fon lighheartRace - ElfClass - RogueBasic Background - Basically spent his free time training in the woods to learn basic combat skills, he was always a naturally gifted thief and socialite. His classy swagger and high level of confidence catches a lot of attention from all types of interesting people. He's a last killer and will always go out of his way to rescue a damsel.What is your quest? - As a neutral chaotic character he accepts any quest given to him. He finds it's easier to float by in the wind than to spend a lifetime in struggle.InventorySmall napsackPair of daggersRed hatTan jacketTan shirtBaggy brown pantsTall dark brown boots.Other - N/AHp - 5Mana - 0StrengthUnarmed - 5Throwing - 0Melee - 3Intimidation - 0RangeLong - 2Hand - 0Small - 0Explosive - 0IntelligenceLight Magic - 0Dark Magic - 0Knowledge - 0Perception - 0DiplomacyBarter - 0Charisma - 4Courage - 0Leadership - 0SurvivalReflex - 2Crafting - 0First Aid - 0Stamina - 2Stealth - 5 +1Steal - 5 +1Lockpick - 3 +1Agility - 4 +1I borrowed ishvals cs as a background. [/quote] Hi your character sheet is better but you can not go over 5 points on a single skill the +1's mean that your stealth stuff is at 6 which wont give you anymore boosts then if they where on 5 my suggestion would be to lower the stealth ones down by one and use the 4 extra points on other skills. Sorry if this was all confusing but I am here for any help if you need it. also it looks like you have only used 35 points out of a possible 48 Maybe you could put the 13 extra points you will have from these edits into some of the skills you have put as zero?