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Name: Jason ArdenAlias: Golden ThunderGender: maleAge: 16Powers/Abilities: Shazam's abilities, Personality: Angry, Twisted, was once happy but now the world is a dark place, Backstory: Jason lived a fairly normal life, he was an average kid besides the fact he lived in an orphanage, he lived an okay life and even had a girlfriend, but things really got interesting when he met an old man who asked him to become a protector of mankind, when Jason agreed he was given the powers of Shazam! Life got fun after that Jason did his best to be a hero. He even managed to do a pretty good job, but nothing good lasts forever. When his girlfriend was murdered Jason spiraled out of control, losing himself in his hate he started to become a beacon of punishment instead of justice. He only went downhill from there, turning against his fellow heroes and turning to self gain and a path of malice becoming something dark...Alignment Status: Evil/Chaotic[IMG]
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Hey mak, glad you're here, but I kind of see a bit too much potential for an overpowered character here. Being able to lift entire continents and having strength that so nearly rivals Superman? Loads of invulnerabilities to both physical and mental attacks, extremely quick healing even when he gets hurt...

I like Shazam as much as the next guy, but it'd be a good idea to tone down his powers. Do that and include an explanation on the limits of each, and you'll have a better chance of being accepted.