[quote=Sauron The Dark Lord]
Haz: could you please tell me what I need to do to get accepted?
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Cqpital population - Over two million.
Disease would spread like wildfire. To put it into perspective, the Domesday book (A book written in the dark ages listing the population of England) says there were around 2.5 million people in England as a whole. Our RP is set before even that time.

Gold plating on the soldiers - would you really shell out for gold plate for every Holy Legion member? Also, I can't see gold mining anywhere in your NS, so do they import the gold or mine it?

Other than that, you're fine.