If I may say. Having read this through before. And reading it through again after this edit. The only difference I can tell is that you put everything in hiders. There has been no added information. you are still offering the same product. It just looks fancier now. But the level of substance has remained. And its the lack of substance that is what people are talking about. Hiders are cool and i'm not trying to sound like a complete and utter douche. But i'm also trying to help. I see three or four added sentences to various factions. these just spell obvious aminosity towards elemental opposites, but don't really add any depth or the world. You need more fluff to grab people attentions.