fist of let me say Rose i can see where you are coming from but a lot of the powers she has rejected are a sub ability of stronger powers and where as it dose not she you have to have strong powers it dose state you will be fighting other packs so it would stand to reason that you would need good power in order to defend yourself and the pack and as for her being harsh she is i agree but she is getting relay annoyed with contently repeating herself and even though you haven't seen it let me just add this has also been going on in PM with multiple people where she has heard them out with their powers and explained the situation she has even shown me some of the quotes but she has just had enough that's y she has handed it over to me but if i where in here position it would not have gone on for this long as i would have been more direct with those who she has had this problem with but i wont mention any names anyway sorry to see you go and try not to hold it agents her she has just lost her peasants today is all 

ok now i have taken a quick look at everyone's CS's accepted and none accepted and this is a of week powers u ay want to change and stronger power serjestions that give you the same ability as the weaker version you chose this is in order of when i spotted them now obviously those who been accepted dont have to make any edits but i would strongly serjest you do as i have been told that i am allowed to kill of any of the weaker wolfs and i am going to make a character just for that porpoise now we will all end up fighting him he will only kill those who are week and cant put up a good fight 

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Stitchblades, Bjomolf, Power 1: his large size has given him abnormal strength for a pup of his age thats not even a power or an abillity its basically make you like any other body builder IRL but he is a pup so he will have others to look after him so if you dont want to edit you should be pretty save as long as you have Strong body guards now you could give him enhanced ability's I.E strength speed agility dexterity regeneration ect or you could focus on strength in witch case give him super strength and invulnerability or go with one of the mimicry powers i mentioned before as their are a lot of animals that are stronger then wolfs both IRL and in myths that would give you that ability like my spder ability give me enhanced strength and agility 

Argetlam350 Thalesin Power 2: Unusually fast, more then most wolves. ok this one is an elder so he probably wont be doing much fighting but you basically just made him like any Olympic runner you could do the same thing as i serjested for Stitchblades 

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Argetlam350 Zaccar Power 1: Manipulates smoke ok i have watched one piece and i know smoker is pretty strong but his body is made out of smoke so unless you are going to do something simmaler i cant see how that will help you other then covering your escape Power 2: Some unusual strength for a wolf ok what is it with theses so called types of powers enhanced strength is classed as an ability super strength a power theses types of powers are never trust me on this you could put that in your bio and give a half assessed expansion like he works out a lot and gained a lot of muscal and one would accept it you are meant to be the hunter leader and from what i can see you are one of the weakest hunters if you want to control smoke why dont you give yourself water/ ice control as that actually lets u manipulate water ice snow and steam now i know that seam is not smoke but it is close enoth that the one will let you control smoke with considering how annoyed she is for power two see perveios tips i gave Stitchblades and Argetlam350 now you dont have to edit as i believe u have already been accepted but if you dont i dont think you will live long and since i am one of the three who will be killing of characters others being one and DKUK i know what i am talking about here

SomeoneSomewere Austin Power 1: telepathy( communication with mind alone. Once he creates a conversation he can recieve thoughts aswell from the other person before he ends the conversation.) that just telekinesis so y dont u add physic 

FireHeartWolf Alexis(Alex) Power 1: When she sinks her fangs into something, it injects a paralysing poison. If she catches someone out, her pack then has the upper-hand. if you give yourself spider or lizard mimicry you would have that anyway as well as other ability's and have access to different types of venom Power 2: Can create a 'forcefield' or barrier surrounding something, creating it invisible and masks into the background- much like camouflage. light control can do the exact same thing and you can use it to kill people and fly who dosnt like flying?

FireHeartWolf Tristan Power 1: If he makes contact with someone- licks them, cuddles them ext.- he will sooth them and, if he licks a wound, can heal. ok sound manipulation can do the fist part as you could use it to sing with has been proven to sooth animals IRL as well as bring out other emotions as for the healing if you use the Molecular Acceleration sub ability theoretically you could accelerate the body natural healing process this link will enplane it in more detail http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Sound_Manipulation power 2: Can communicate with people by sending them images telepathically-but only pictures, no words same as someonesomewheres power1 

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Athinar Bandit Power 2: Enhanced healing same as Argetlam350 and Stitchblades but for the mimicry you would need something like lizard dragon or phoenix thinks than naturally regenerate faster then other animals 

Cerberus Apollo Power 1: Empathic healing- Takes wounds and pain onto herself.
Power 2: Hyper persuasion- Hypnotically forces others to obey comands, this is weaker on Alphas, Elders, and ones with strong will. ok power 1 is a unique ability's so its hard to give you a power that can do them but their are lodes of ways to heal other if that's what you want to do i can give you list if you need ideas and as for Power 2 you can use physic/telekinesis and you could attack and defend with it and considering you are a Caretaker and part of your job is protecting pups and the sick/ injured you should make him a bit stronger 

Cerberus Artemis Power 1: Vulpes senses: Can hear and smell much better than a wolf should, matching the senses of foxes./ CerberusArtemisPower 1: Vulpes senses: Can hear and smell much better than a wolf should, matching the senses of foxes.OrionPower 1: Vulpine Physiology- Has a Fox like appearance and senses. ok i have gone though the enhanced ability and senses thing a few times now so i assume you all get the idea 

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Destinyfailhorror17 Corin Power: Super sonic bark (deathen enemies if they got to close and disorientate them, leaving them defenceless) ok sound manipulation would not only give you the same ability and more it would make this power completely useless 

Destinyfailhorror17CorinPower: Super sonic bark (deathen enemies if they got to close and disorientate them, leaving them defenceless) same as Destinyfailhorror17/ Corins Power 

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HellHoundWoof Lupus Power 1: He is capable of seeing far distances with his ome eye. ok this power can be use as a sub power of a lode of stronger power or you could just do the same thing as i have said about the enhanced ability's if you need a more detailed list then let me know that is if you are still interested after all that 
Power 2: He can make his fur hard as bone when necessary. Bone manipulation this would allow you to make bone armor and fire parts of your bones as weapons and give you enhanced regeneration

now to address Roses commute duplicate powers yes they are a lot of them but that is because there a lot of similar ability's