Very good, save for one insignificant mistake, non too bothersome, but just pointing it out:
[quote]He eyed the pair of [b]SV-52[/b]'s on his wings, and mentally noted how well both Svenja and [b]Rita[/b] flew.[/quote]
Rita actually flies a VF-1, or, as I'm mostly going to start calling it since I can't be bothered to remember the name, the Spacy-Tomcat-Eagle. Not too much of problem, as I said, but I wanted to put it out there before getting to writing.