Lovely. Now all I need is to save it to the first page one you've posted in the hole. I'm not 100% sure Doctor. I want bickering and arguments, but I also want them to be good friends. They've long broken up I assume? Grant still has feelings for her but he really values the friendship too much to ruin it... What do you think? She could also be the reason he's going on the trip. Leck would be a prefect confidant in my opinion.