[quote=DaDrummer676]
Legion I have some advice about your character. This i my personal opinon so feel free to ignore it. But I have a question concerning David's weaknesses.You said - The very power he uses can and will kill him if he isn’t cautious. To make things worse he doesn’t even know exactly with what he’s dealing. Finally, it’s not excluded that Wizards might hunt him down, kill him and steal the crystal in his stomach. But he would have no idea why he’s being attacked.The first weakness, is kind of pointless, unless you really intend for him to die for his own powers. I like the second weakness, I mean, if you actually roleplay him messing up a few times. The third is a little weird, do you really intend for him to be hunted? That's not really a weakness, it's a DANGER. I think ou should make an actually physical or psychological weakness. Like he can't use his powers properly if he isn't in the light of the sun or moon or something like that. Or something even as simple as he's afraid of fire, etc.
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I will most certaintly listen to it! Thank you very much. I made the power yesterday evening and it was getting kind of late. I already thought that it hadn't have enough weaknesses but couldn't really make any up. Also, about the first weakness. I'm not very sure if i want him to die because of it. But he will most certaintly get hurt by it. That's where the second weakness also comes in. He doesn't know what he's supposed to do and has painfully little experience. So it's very possible that spells backfire. If i want him to be hunted. I have no idea to be honest. I just placed it there if anyone ever wants to use it or not. Anyway i do think i'm going to make up another few weaknesses.