Alright, Shon. So, at Dervs' request and my very belated curiosity, I have read over the edited version of the CS you've posted. I have confidence that you edited it accordingly to Dervs' requests, and having read it myself, find no problem with it at first glance. I'm also confident that I won't find any problem with it at second glance, either. Consider yourself accepted and feel free to continue writing any intro post.