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Height and weight varies, but in his human form, he is 5'7" and weighs 150 pounds.Name[First and Last, Middle and Nicknames are optional]: Pascal "Puck" RobbinsAge[High School to College age, please.]: 17 (Actually 1300, but we can ignore that.)Gender: MaleSpecies/Race [Feel free to create your own! Just know that I'm going to be kind of picky. I just want to keep everything balanced.] Phooka (Pronounced like Koopa, but with the consonants swapped.)Powers: [Shapeshifting]A Phooka can change forms between a human, horse, goat, rabbit, or dog, or any combination of these. While in human form, it is given away by either long, slightly curved horns, or large rabbit ears. In it's other forms, it usually has black or dark brown fur.[Fortune]For this RP, I've decided to give this character the ability to modify luck. This ranges from getting the right cards in poker, to an ejected spaceship part landing on an opponents head. Since it is luck, the effects of this power can be quite unexpected, and (since we are writing this) cause for hilarity,Weaknesses: Whenever one person is lucky, someone else has to be unlucky. This leads to the belief that Phookas bring good and bad fortune with them. For example, with the above ejected spaceship part, some unfortunate spaceship pilot now loses their mission, and probably their job.Personality[Optional, just helps you get a feel for what you want your character to be like.]: To Be Roleplayed (But I'm leaning towards a wise, grouchy old man personality. To clash with his 17-year-old appearance, of course.)Background[Doesn't have to be long.]: Puck hails from northern Ireland, where he's lived for about 200 years. He was quite happy there, but staying in one place for that long draws attention. Sure enough, a group of young wizards came knocking on his cottage door, and Puck knew his time there was up. He narrowly escaped the hair-seeking juveniles, and made his way to [a town near wherever this school is located], where he heard about a miraculous school. Reading between the lines, as a mythical character is apt to do, he realized that it was no ordinary miraculous school, but a literally miraculous school, full of odd creatures like himself. Puck was a bit lonely after his many hermit years, and thought it would be a good idea to get into society again. He rented an apartment in that town, and in a few months, an invitation to the school showed up in his P.O, box.Study[What does your character plan on studying? What classes will they take? What do they like? Band? Art? Sports? List 'em here!]: Puck isn't really interested in studying, since a lot of the "mortal" subjects (Math, History, Science, etc..) in the place are already known to him. His goal there is rather to study other people, to have fun, and to add to his collection of memories.
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So, I'd like to point out a couple things first.

-It'd make the Character Sheet look cleaner if you took out the [additional comments] HylianRose put for each info category.

-I am personally not against the shapeshifting ability, but so far, there's already been two characters with the same ability. Your character does have the ability to mix-and-match animal parts, but I haven't actually gone through every single CS yet (doing that tomorrow cause I'm studying for a test). I'll discuss this with HylianRose once she gets online.

-Fortune sounds, and is already an interesting idea that could create some hilarious moments! The thing I'm concerned, though, is the way it could be extremely overpowered. Sure, bringing fortunes already sounds like a different idea, but the misfortunes can also be [i]extremely unfair for other roleplayers[/i]. The roleplay is generally lighthearted, but cool abilities like this tends to conflict with plans the GM makes for the roleplay's actual [b]plot[/b]. Simply using misfortunes to attack any character (NPCs and player characters alike) will make other roleplayers actually feel underpowered.

I will talk with HylianRose about this, but I highly suggest you change this particular ability. It's cool (interesting as well!), but it is a generally unhealthy ability for the roleplaying experience other people have. [i]I learned this the hard way.[/i]

+Good background, from what I can see! I'd like to see his personality coming to life soon. ;D (His reason for going to classes are funny if you think about it XD)

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Right now, it would be nice if you cleaned up the Character Sheet by taking out the [additional info] made by HylianRose. Every other matter is something I want to talk about with the GM, but this guy does show a unique promise! :D