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On second thought... here it is:Name: BelleAge: 22Gender: FemaleSpecies: HumanPowers/Abilities: none..Fairytale: Beauty and the BeastPart in Story: BeautyHistory: A wealthy merchant lived in a mansion with his three daughters. They all were very beautiful, but only the youngest, twenty-year-old Belle, was lovely and pure of heart; her sisters, in contrast, were wicked and selfish. The merchant eventually lost all of his wealth in a tempest at sea. He and his daughters were consequently forced to live in a small farmhouse and work for their living. After some years of that, the merchant hears that one of the trade ships he had sent off has arrived back in port, having escaped the destruction of its compatriots. He returned to the city to discover whether it contained anything valuable. Before leaving, he asked his daughters if they would like him to bring any gifts back for them. The oldest two asked for jewels and fine dresses, thinking that his wealth had returned. Belle was satisfied with the promise of a rose, as none grow in their part of the country. The merchant, to his dismay, found that his ship's cargo has been seized to pay his debts, which left him without money to buy his daughters their presents.During his return, the merchant became lost in a forest. Seeking shelter, he entered a dazzling palace. He found tables inside laden with food and drinks, which seemed to have been left for him by the palace's invisible owner. The merchant accepted the gift and spent the night there. The next morning as the merchant was about to leave, he saw a rose garden and recalled that Belle had desired a rose. Upon picking the loveliest rose he was able to find, the merchant was confronted by a hideous "Beast", which told him that for taking his most precious possession after accepting his hospitality, the merchant had to die. The merchant begged to be set free, arguing that he had only picked the rose as a gift for his youngest daughter. The Beast agreed to let him give the rose to Belle, but only if the merchant returned thereafter.The merchant was upset, but accepted the condition. The Beast sent him on his way, with jewels and fine clothes for his daughters, and stressing that Belle must never know about his deal. The merchant, upon arriving home, tried to hide the secret from Belle, but she pries it from him and willingly goes to the Beast's castle. The Beast received her graciously and informed her that she was the mistress of the castle, and he was her servant. He gave her lavish clothing and food and carried on lengthy conversations with her. Every night, the Beast asked Belle to marry him, only to be refused each time. After each refusal, Belle dreamt of a handsome prince who pleaded with her to answer why she kept refusing him, to which she replied that she couldn't marry the Beast because she loved him only as a friend. Belle did not make the connection between the handsome prince and the Beast and became convinced that the Beast was holding the prince captive somewhere in the castle. She searched and discovers multiple enchanted rooms, but never the prince from her dreams.For several months, Belle lives a life of luxury at the Beast's palace, having every whim catered to by servants, with no end of riches to amuse her and an endless supply of exquisite finery to wear. Eventually she became homesick and begged the Beast to allow her to go see her family. He allowed it on the condition that she return exactly a week later. Belle agreed to that and set off for home with an enchanted mirror and ring. The mirror allowed her to see what was going on back at the Beast's castle, and the ring allowes her to return to the castle in an instant when turned three times around her finger. Her older sisters were surprised to find her well fed and dressed in finery. They were envious when they hear of her happy life at the castle, and, hearing that she must return to the Beast on a certain day, begging her to stay another day, even putting onion in their eyes to make it appear as though they are weeping. They hoped that the Beast would be angry with Belle for breaking her promise and eat her alive. Belle's heart was moved by her sisters' false show of love, and she agreed to stay.Belle began to feel guilty about breaking her promise to the Beast and used the mirror to see him back at the castle. She was horrified to discover that the Beast was lying half-dead from heartbreak near the rose bushes her father had stolen from and she immediately used the ring to return to the Beast.Belle weeped over the Beast, saying that she loved him. When her tears struck him, the Beast transformed into the handsome prince from Belle's dreams. The Prince informed her that long ago a fairy turned him into a hideous beast after he refused to let her in from the rain, and that only by finding true love, despite his ugliness, could the curse be broken. He and Belle married and they lived happily ever after together.Personality: She cares for every little animal and being that she comes across, even if they seem evil. She can be a little gullible due to her constant trust in people she knows. When someone is in need of help, she tries to help them out no matter what. She loves to read books all day long, it is what keeps her mind motivated; therefore she is intelligent.Family: Father (Alive), Mother (Deceased), Evil Wicked Sisters (Alive).Friends: Everyone she knows.Crush/Relationships: Beast/Prince,her husband.Other: none.
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but…it is a happy ending…and sounds too Disney, i will accept if you change the ending, so that it isn't so filled with feelings, morals, and meaning