[quote=HylianRose] While it is a cool power, I'm hesitant. Maybe if you made it so that he has no control over it. He just affects 'luck/fate' almost as a aura ability. Meaning that he never does it intentionally and it's never anything really, really terrible. (Not to player characters anyway.) I'm fine if it's like a broken arm or something like that, but it cannot by any mean kill another character. I think that if he had the ability to control it, power would get to his head, as a character and that's what I'm worried about. So just consider this make the changes both I and NK have suggested and post/PM us again with the page your CS is on and we'll look it over again. If you think of another way to make it better, feel free to do this instead. [/quote] Sounds like a good idea. Could you review my post [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/27409/posts/ooc?page=27#post-800103]here[/url], and tell me what you think?