I added Ferros and took out Allegiances. I didn't think it made sense to have your character pledge thier loyalty when I want one of the main driving points of this RP to be 'You never know whose on your side'. All the information that was detailed in those little sections will be exposed in the actual RP. I'm working on Valaria next, and I still need to refine a lot of things but there are some key things I want you all to know as you plan your characters. - Women in Gorgon, Valaria and Valeal arn't treated as equals. You can still make a female knight or any kind of female character you want, but expect your character to face prejudices a male counterpart won't face. - Women in Kain, Ferros and of the Ivory Tower are treated as equals. - Every Kingdom has it's conflicts. - Gorgon's current conflict is one of right to rule. Some think it is in Gorgons interest for House Briar to be on the throne while others believe House Blackwater needs to be restored as the rightful rulers. More on this will be expounded upon in the RP, but the main jist is that Gorgon is in a Succession Crises. - The Order of the Rose is causing a lot of problems in Valeal for the Circle of Magi, and the kings stance in all of this is dubious. The main conflict in Valeal will be the distrust of magic. (It's important to note that magic isn't exactly trusted anywhere, but Valeal is openly starting to move against it thanks to Malfear) - Valaria is of course fighting for its independence against Valeal.. The noble houses (the guys with the professional soldiers) want one among thier own to be crowned should independence be won, the other movement (known as the people's army) wants to place one of thier own on the Throne, someone not of noble blood. Kind of like a big F U to nobility. Ferros wants to join against Valeal, because they fucking hate Valeal, but they only want to join if they know they are going to win and right now Valaria is too torn between themselves to have a chance. - Ferros of course is somewhat straight forward. They're just itching to go to war. Ferros itself will have some inner conflict, the exact details of which are being saved for the RP. - In the Necromancy section I removed the bits about the orbs falling to the sky, the screams at the gate of fire and the heat of the gate. Just think of the Gate of Fire as the last step before death, a step that everyone takes, but as Necromancers you want to conquer death, not be pulled under by it.