I love your character Dawnstar, but we gotta fix a little bit up. This is pretty much my fault, with my broad descriptions.

• It's unrealistic for the Conjurer's to make an Academy, they make up only sixteenth of the population, out of one-hundred thousand. Only about a fifth being able to attend a school, of sorts. [ this doesn't mean you can't be taught, you can be an apprentice of someone.]

• Conjurers are generally, very peaceful people. This is not to say that they don't kill, but they would have a more obvious reason then angered. ( This is an easy fix, just add an intent to kill. )

• It's really nice to see an evil Conjurer, but I should explained that they only make objects. This means that, any created animals wouldn't have a free will of its own. It is entirely controlled by you. So while you're killing off our heros, you can only use objects! : ) [ no elemental magic either! ]