Though, DAWNSTAR. A small nitpick as I hadn't noticed that the three Shadow Pokemon Jason encountered were wild, due to me being tired last night and apparently being too silly to read properly, but there wouldn't really be Shadow Pokemon just roaming about on their own, especially in groups. (They'd be fighting each-other, they certainly wouldn't work together unless their hearts had began opening beforehand.)

I think it could actually be turned into something interesting if these Shadow Pokemon that attacked Jason actually had trainers with ill-intentions. It'd make more sense, and I think it could make for an interesting part of the story in the future. I've already began putting thought into it.

*Cough*

Anyways, the IC will be up today, as I'm free of work and have time to think. I'll post the link as soon as it's posted.