[quote=shadowkiller912]
By the way, finished Lander Cs. Wat you think?
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Add some history to the start, i have no idea how he came to become a great naval commander that would warrant such a price from Dooku in the building of an academey for him to teach. Describe a climatic battle where his skills were on display, showing his tactics so i can make sense on how he will fight.

You want to be a commander, than so be it. Give me something to work with so i know why the CIS invests heavily in this young guy.

And the age is off, this takes place in 14BBY. Says in the OP Five years. :)))