Man, I haven't even read it yet. XD It's so long and I just finished writing it so I was like, "Man, that shit's long. I'm sure it's fine." lmao Editing is one of my least favorite things. :s It's kind of ironic considering I'm such a perfectionist, but I actually think that's why. If I get started, I will never be satisfied and the editing will just be a fruitless and stressful venture. If I don't let myself get started, it's a little easier to deal with. Kind obsess over flaws if I never re-read and find 'em. >.>

That is a hilarious power!!!!! The artist in me would love it, but that's about the only use I'd have for it. lol My character was pretty much designed to end up being a really good sidekick despite the premise being that the city was looking for a new hero. I thought it'd be an interesting challenge to try and keep up. Plus, I really hoped she'd end up being one of the other character's partner. She had pretty good synergy with every member, though their powers didn't necessarily make sense together. Also, she was the tiniest member by far. think she was like, 6 inches aka about 15 cm shorter than the next shortest member. XD She was the only girl that really counted. lmao There was another female but she covered herself up enough that my character thought she was a guy. lol But anyway, the other female character was a lesbian, so anyone who had romantic intentions had to fight over my adorably tiny, slightly timid, support-type character. I'm not going to lie, it was nice having my pick of the litter. XD But of course the one I wanted to see her with most was not the one she would have realistically chosen. :/ There was a character named Limewire (I think his alias was Simon?) that did cheesy one-liners like old school Spiderman and it was the greatest thing ever! So many puns! <3 But I think he was a bit too.... I dunno, free-spirited and goofy to have really been good for Hana. Amusingly enough, the person I saw her most likely to pair up with was the biggest of the bunch. He was and entire foot (30.5 cm) taller than her! He was also all big and muscly so she probably could sit on one of his shoulders. lmao Super cute mental images there. <3

EDIT: You read fast! :o But I'm glad you like it. I was a little worried I was rushing the scene too much and making it not much of a fair fight/ not providing enough detail, but the post was getting so long I didn't think I should drag it out even further.